I like this composition much - and that wood panel laptop is pretty sweet, I'd like one, but then again its Asus, a brand whose line of laptops I need to see evolve a little more before investing in them. I got to watch out what I begin to like, though, because wood panels tend to be liked by the geriatric variety if you know what I mean....
So what purpose does the laptop serve in the wild? Do parrots nest in it? Spiders lay their traps in it? Does the secret hyper-advanced monkey civilization study with it? Or is it a sentient self-concious organism capable of sending cheap Viagra ad-spam and stealing your bank account? And do you think that if you ate it you'd get qwertytis and die?
One thing I should prob make clear in the description; I'm not looking for critique. The job is finished, the piece is done. It's been approved by the client, it's been published and broadcast - I'm just sharing it here to show people what I've been up to. dA is a great tool for getting feedback and improving, but it's not really what I use it for when I show work that was completed months ago.
This isn't a shot at you - I appreciate you taking the time to write a decent comment - getting rarer as time goes on! I just am not personally looking for detailed critique on the stuff I submit, as it's always completed work.
No problem I will remind it next time I watch your deviations.
Howether I know you don`t need my Comment or Critique so you don`t have to wonder if I don`t comment next time because I´m not watching you for giving you comments which are senseless comments, I`m because I want to help you.
So I`ll read your Artist Comment next time with more attention...
ekud, ive always loved your stuff. but this time, i dont know. somehow its just not you... im used too better than this /: especially on the left one, i dont like it at all. its much too dark, the bird throws no shadow on the lappy etc. sry
You're very welcome! Your works are perfect, and I've read your journal yesterday and I'm totally agree. For example,my works are very simple cause I've started with Maya only in March 2008, I'm learning by myself and the same with Photoshop, I'm not an art student,so you can understand my problems. I think to have some creativity but I really don't have the art knowledge. This is my problem, so I'm happy when I watch all deviantartists works and I absolutely don't want a DD I only wanna stay here on deviantART